Tuesday, 22 October 2013

Chapters 1-2

In the first few chapters, the main person, David, is explaining a lot about the setting of the story. The first few chapters are usually about building a foundation for the rest of the story to built upon. David tells how the society is very judging about anything not normal. But when David meets Sophie it doesn't appear to him that she's not normal. I think that what David said about what the bible said is very wrong. God created everyone equally and he tells us we need to love everyone. I am surprised by how much they don't like people who are different and what David's father did about different things. This book so far reminds me of the racism in To Kill A Mockingbird. It's similar because in this book they hate all people with differences and in To Kill A Mockingbird they hate all black people. I do think this is going to be a good book and I'm excited to read more.

10 comments:

  1. Sweet response bro. I wish you had made some predictions about what's going to happen, I was quite disappointed in you. I like how you compared it to To Kill A Mockingbird, deep stuff bro. Overall it was a decent response, better luck next time.

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  2. Fo Sho bro, deep stuff..... People getting hated on for... stuff

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    1. Finally, someone who knows how I feel

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    2. I know bro, I wish you went to my school we could write short stories together and...... stuff
      now im back off to the sweat shop

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    3. We should totally write some stuff together, I'll introduce you to my character Shaniqua someday, peace out brah

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    4. i love your feedback, you guys are awesome!!!!!!

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    5. live long and....... uh.... stuff

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  4. Great work - good connection to the To Kill a Mockingbird novel. Do you think our current society is guilty of any of these offences?

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